Tuesday 9 August 2011

NARRATIVE WRITING

Our goal was to write a poem based on a familiar object or phenomenon and use personification to describe it.






What non-living object could you write about?

11 comments:

  1. Fantastic writing! I really enjoyed reading these poems. Well done!

    I would probably write about my cell phone.

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  2. Those are very funny poems room12 very cool

    by Rania

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  3. Cool story Tali reminds me of my bag. It's so small I have to jam things in to it. I would write about my computer :P
    Stacy

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  4. I would write about my laptop how it starts dying when it runs out of battery.

    by Daniel

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  5. jenni your poem is so cool especially the roaring thunder sentence.

    and i (logan) would write about my rugby ball and me (zafar) would write hayne plane

    by zafar and logan.

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  6. I would write about my computer those poems are really cool they were awsome to read


    By Hayden

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  7. Jenni that a cool poeam






    jaydee the spelling is konrad but it was by me

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  8. Those poems are awsome! Why did you choose those non-living objects to write about?...... If it was me I would choose my bed.

    From Shaun.

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  9. That's what my bag would say:-)
    I would write about a skateboard,it would be kind of hard though.

    <<_Vinnie_>>

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  10. Nice poems room 12 really liked them.
    I would probably write about a car, because I know a little bit about them.

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  11. hhahar tali your school bag poem is really funny
    umm i would write about my cell phone
    and so would stevie

    Terina and stevie

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